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Manuscript Development Packages

for writers who want expert feedback and a plan for next steps on a completed draft
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Manuscript development can help if you...
  • have a completed draft but don't know what to do next
  • know something isn't working with your draft but don't know how to identify it or how to fix it
  • have received feedback from another editor or beta reader and are looking for another set of eyes
  • want in-depth feedback on both the big picture elements and the tiny details within your story
  • ​want feedback on plot, structure, characters, story arcs, pacing, worldbuilding, etc.
Services:
>> Manuscript Review
>> Manuscript Evaluation
​>> Developmental Edit
Manuscript Review
for writers who want a low-cost, brief overview of the manuscript's current state

Quick Read-Through
  • I will read through your entire manuscript to get an overall sense of the structure and its strengths and weaknesses.
Feedback
  • ​You will receive a brief editorial summary (1-2 pages) that gives an overview of the current shape of the manuscript, along with suggestions for next steps.
Investment
  • a one-time payment of ​$200
Manuscript Evaluation
for writers who want in-depth feedback on a completed draft

Initial Coaching Call
  • We will meet at the start to discuss the process, expectations, goals, and any questions you have.
Feedback on a 1-page worksheet
  • You will be given a 1-page worksheet that will ask you to think deeply about the foundation of your novel/story idea. This includes elements like genre, why you want to write this story, your ideal reader, and a broad idea of your plot and characters.
  • While giving feedback on your manuscript, I will keep your worksheet answers in mind and check to see if the elements are present throughout your story.
Initial Read-Through
  • ​I will do an initial quick read of the manuscript to get a sense of the overall story structure and the big picture elements.
​Thorough Read-Through
  • ​On my second read, I will go through your manuscript scene-by-scene, looking at the strengths and weaknesses of every aspect of your story. This includes looking at plot, characters, world-building, pacing, flow, structure, and more.
Feedback
  • ​You will receive an extensive editorial summary with feedback on strengths, weaknesses, suggestions, and next steps. You will also receive a story analysis report that looks at the overall arc of the story.
  • You will receive a style guide that outlines characters, locations, and timelines for your story that can be used as you revise or for additional editing.
60-minute Coaching Call
  • ​After receiving feedback, we will meet on a call to discuss the feedback, any questions you have, and next steps.
Investment
  • $0.02/word
  • payment plans available​​​​
Developmental Editing
for writers who want in-depth feedback on a complete draft plus in-line comments

Initial Coaching Call
  • We will meet at the start to discuss the process, expectations, goals, and any questions you have.
Feedback on a 1-page worksheet
  • You will be given a 1-page worksheet that will ask you to think deeply about the foundation of your novel/story idea. This includes elements like genre, why you want to write this story, your ideal reader, and a broad idea of your plot and characters.
  • While giving feedback on your manuscript, I will keep your worksheet answers in mind and check to see if the elements are present throughout your story.
Initial Read-Through
  • ​I will do an initial quick read of the manuscript to get a sense of the overall story structure and the big picture elements.
​Thorough Read-Through
  • ​On my second read, I will go through your manuscript scene-by-scene, looking at the strengths and weaknesses of every aspect of your story. This includes looking at plot, characters, world-building, pacing, flow, structure, and more.
Feedback
  • ​You will receive an extensive editorial summary with feedback on strengths, weaknesses, suggestions, and next steps. You will also receive a story analysis report that looks at the overall arc of the story.​
  • You will receive in-line comments throughout the manuscript that point out specific moments of strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions.
  • You will receive a style guide that outlines characters, locations, and timelines for your story that can be used as you revise or for additional editing.
60-minute Coaching Call
  • ​After receiving feedback, we will meet on a call to discuss the feedback, any questions you have, and next steps.
Investment
  • $0.03/word
  • payment plans available​​
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  • About
  • Newsletter
  • Books
    • Beyond the Gates Series
  • Services for Writers
    • Overview
    • Book Coaching
    • Manuscript Development
    • Editorial Services
  • Contact
  • Shop